I am a Year 6 student at papakura-central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room kahikatea hub and my teachers are whea Sharlee and whea Tamzin. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Awesome mahi! I love your description and how you compared the creature to other animals that you know. Great introducing yourself and spelling out your name! Ka pai! Miss G :)
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
good job BROOKE
ReplyDeleteAwesome mahi! I love your description and how you compared the creature to other animals that you know. Great introducing yourself and spelling out your name! Ka pai!
ReplyDeleteMiss G :)