I am a Year 6 student at papakura-central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room kahikatea hub and my teachers are whea Sharlee and whea Tamzin. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
This was a good food review Brooke. You have used a variety of describing words such as 'sticky' and 'soft' to describe the feeling of the dough. I also liked how you provided a link for a pani popo recipe. Keep up the great work.
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This was a good food review Brooke. You have used a variety of describing words such as 'sticky' and 'soft' to describe the feeling of the dough. I also liked how you provided a link for a pani popo recipe. Keep up the great work.
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