I am a Year 6 student at papakura-central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room kahikatea hub and my teachers are whea Sharlee and whea Tamzin. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Delightful dinosaur learning, great to see the details you used to describe your dinosaur. Details make your writing more interesting for your audience, ka pai! Do you think we should bring dinosaurs back? Miss G :)
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Delightful dinosaur learning, great to see the details you used to describe your dinosaur. Details make your writing more interesting for your audience, ka pai! Do you think we should bring dinosaurs back?
ReplyDeleteMiss G :)