I am a Year 6 student at papakura-central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room kahikatea hub and my teachers are whea Sharlee and whea Tamzin. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Great work Brooke. I can tell your group worked hard to complete this presentation. You have shown the sources you found your information from which is what I wanted groups to do. Next time I think you could add a few more labels. For this task you could have added: science, frogs, research...
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
you have gone further than the teacher said and tried your hardest and the work has payed of good work brooke.
ReplyDeleteGreat work Brooke. I can tell your group worked hard to complete this presentation. You have shown the sources you found your information from which is what I wanted groups to do. Next time I think you could add a few more labels. For this task you could have added: science, frogs, research...
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