I am a Year 6 student at papakura-central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room kahikatea hub and my teachers are whea Sharlee and whea Tamzin. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
today cam came into our class and taught us about good and bad comments here is me and Amani's comparison of a good and a bad comment. could you demonstrate a good comment in the comment section?
Awesome job Brooke. I like how you have shown a comparison between a good and bad comment. You could have added some more labels to this blog post such as learning and commenting.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Awesome job Brooke. I like how you have shown a comparison between a good and bad comment. You could have added some more labels to this blog post such as learning and commenting.
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